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The day is birthed by wrathful sun,Enwreathed in cloud-torn cords;But as sun rises day calms down:Night o'erturned: balance restored.
The day is birthed by wrathful sunEnwreathed in cloud-torn cords;But as sun rises day calms down:Night overturned: balance restored.Better minus line 1 comma and line 4 apostrophe.
nice poem ricpicand the second one is definitely betterlose the 18th century apostrophehey where's the rosy finger'd dawnno rosy finger'd dawn in those pixthey promised me a rosy finger'd dawn at school
No rosy finger'd dawn for YOU!-- Soup Nazi
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The day is birthed by wrathful sun,
Enwreathed in cloud-torn cords;
But as sun rises day calms down:
Night o'erturned: balance restored.
The day is birthed by wrathful sun
Enwreathed in cloud-torn cords;
But as sun rises day calms down:
Night overturned: balance restored.
Better minus line 1 comma
and line 4 apostrophe.
nice poem ricpic
and the second one is definitely better
lose the 18th century apostrophe
hey where's the rosy finger'd dawn
no rosy finger'd dawn in those pix
they promised me a rosy finger'd dawn at school
No rosy finger'd dawn for YOU!
-- Soup Nazi
Bad weather,I want to know you something about mensusa(d0t)com you know that they give discounts in big suits and Free shipping in all $99 above.
Post a Comment